Saturday, April 17, 2010

Freeze Frame

I feel really bad about not posting last night. But I was slammed with slave labor, and out-of-sorts as it was. To top it off, I must give all credit to a serious case of writer's block for the briefness of this week's piece. Brief as in four lines. But here it is:

Not by weakness,
but by will,
I gave you my heart
and time stood still.

3 comments:

  1. Some of my best reads were single stanza poems. I love your quatrain- so much employed in so little space ... well done.

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  2. Oh wow...talk about cutting to the heart with a few epic phrases!!
    This is something like a tattoo...stuck in my mind - I will recite this to myself. : )

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  3. Its a Much better short poem than I could ever Write! Surprise! your favorite person from Public speaking got a blog and is using a pen name! Anyway I am going to follow your blog now so keep up the good work! :)

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